
{"id":26,"date":"2019-08-09T02:57:40","date_gmt":"2019-08-09T02:57:40","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/pressbooks.oer.hawaii.edu\/englishcomposition\/chapter\/intellectual-standards-for-quality\/"},"modified":"2019-08-26T16:49:40","modified_gmt":"2019-08-26T16:49:40","slug":"intellectual-standards-for-quality","status":"publish","type":"chapter","link":"https:\/\/pressbooks.oer.hawaii.edu\/englishcomposition\/chapter\/intellectual-standards-for-quality\/","title":{"raw":"1.3 Intellectual Standards for Quality","rendered":"1.3 Intellectual Standards for Quality"},"content":{"raw":"<div class=\"intellectual-standards-for-quality\">\r\n\r\nThe word \u201cstandard\u201d is used to describe the level of quality that a given item possesses. So an \u201cintellectual standard\u201d is one that measures the overall value of a scholarly effort. Such standards apply to essays, reports, assignments, group discussions, and even notetaking. For overall success, students need to know their professors\u2019 standards and need to develop their own standards, with the concept of\u00a0 \u201cintellectual standards\u201d at the forefront.\r\n\r\nThere are nine primary intellectual standards to keep in mind: clarity, precision, accuracy, depth, breadth, logic, significance, relevance, and fairness. Keeping a list of these standards (or even using an actual checklist) and applying them to academic thinking, writing, and other scholarly interaction is an excellent way to ensure one\u2019s continued intellectual growth and college and career success.\r\n\r\nThese standards can help scholars, both students and instructors, form connected and quality ideas (e.g., \u201ccritical thinking\u201d or \u201canalysis\u201d) and craft written work (e.g., essays, reports, articles, reflections, and other writing sometimes known as \u201cpapers\u201d or \u201chomework\u201d).\r\n<h2>Clarity: Do You Get It?<\/h2>\r\nMany of the editorial comments and corrections (e.g., those from peers, mentors, tutors, and professors) shared with students regarding their written work is related to clarity. When an essay is clear, it\u2019s understandable and communicates information to readers with ease. None of the statements are confusing or ambiguous. There aren\u2019t areas within the essay where the meaning is lost due to exaggerated narrative or forced and unnatural word choice. When an essay is clear, readers can follow the path that the writer is communicating. They can read smoothly without stopping to ponder what a word or even an entire sentence means.\r\n<h3>Sentence Clarity<\/h3>\r\n<h4>Misplaced Modifiers<\/h4>\r\nOne way sentences become unclear is when they include misplaced (or dangling) modifiers or vague pronoun references. Here are some examples:\r\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px;\">Original: <em>The sun, as he was surfing, sparkled on the water.<\/em><\/p>\r\n\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li style=\"list-style-type: none;\">\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">In this sentence, the modifying phrase \u201cas he was surfing\u201d is placed where it modifies the sun not the surfer. (i.e., It sounds like the sun is surfing.)<\/li>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">The sentence also loses clarity because the pronoun \u201che\u201d is vague.<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px;\">Revised: <em>As Kalani surfed, the sun sparkled on the water.<\/em><\/p>\r\n\r\n<h4>Missing Punctuation<\/h4>\r\nPunctuation marks can be tricky. However, within the English language, their correct usage is essential to be sure one\u2019s intended meaning is clear. Here's an example:\r\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px;\">Original: <em>Lets eat Grandma<\/em><\/p>\r\n\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li style=\"list-style-type: none;\">\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Devoid of punctuation, it seems like Grandma is going to be dinner.<\/li>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">To clarify, an apostrophe and a comma are needed.<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px;\">Revised: <em>Let\u2019s eat, Grandma!<\/em><\/p>\r\nPunctuation is for the reader, so it's important that each punctuation mark's usage is clear and that the writer knows how to use it correctly\r\n<h3>Rhetoric: Is Meaning Clear for Everyone?<\/h3>\r\nWhen words have more than one meaning, using them in a sentence or within an essay can pose problems related to clarity. The word \u201crhetoric\u201d is one such word. Generally thought of as \u201cthe art of speaking or writing effectively,\u201d the word enters many English writing classroom discussions.\r\n\r\nSometimes <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>rhetoric<span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201d<\/span> is referred to in a negative light, as in the way some people sometimes express themselves using bombastic and hyperbolic words and expressions. The Merriam-Webster dictionary also tells us that rhetoric can be defined as \u201cthe study of writing or speaking as a means of communication or persuasion\u201d or \u201cskill in the effective use of speech.\u201d It can even be simply considered as \u201cverbal communication\u201d and \u201cdiscourse\u201d (<span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>Rhetoric,\u201d <a href=\"https:\/\/www.merriam-webster.com\/dictionary\/rhetoric\">Merriam-Webster<\/a>). So knowing the many definitions for this word is essential for college success because individuals, including instructors, will discuss rhetoric in a variety of ways.\r\n\r\nThe history of rhetoric is directly connected to the Greek philosopher Aristotle, whose rhetorical concepts are central for understanding the art of persuasion (also called argumentation) in both speaking and writing. Most high school students may know about logos, ethos, and pathos; however, other rhetorical concepts exist, as described below.\r\n<h4>Clarifying Aristotelian Rhetorical Concepts<\/h4>\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>TELOS<\/strong> is the Greek word indicating the \u201cpurpose\u201d of a speech or text. It refers to a writer\u2019s intended purpose as well as to the audience\u2019s purpose as readers who wish to be informed by the writer\u2019s words.<\/li>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>KAIROS<\/strong> translates from Greek to the \u201cright, critical, or opportune\u201d moment, and the term can be used when talking about the persuasion of an audience through writing or speaking. Analyzing the rhetorical techniques of a speech or text through kairos involves determining how the language within a text supports an argument using the setting, time, and place.<\/li>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>LOGOS<\/strong> roughly translates to \u201cword,\u201d and it is consistently used when determining the logic of reasoning within an argument. Some students simplify this concept to mean facts, figures, and statistics, which writers use to appeal to readers\u2019 sense of reason.<\/li>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>ETHOS<\/strong> is Greek for \u201ccharacter,\u201d which speaks to a writer\u2019s authority and expertise. As such, incorporating ethos within an argument establishes the writer as credible. Some students simplify this concept as an <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>ethical appeal\u201d or the traits of trustworthiness or credibility.<\/li>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>PATHOS<\/strong> is the Greek word indicating not only \u201csuffering\u201d but also \u201cexperience,\u201d and it is related to feelings, beliefs, and values, sometimes simplified as an <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>emotional appeal.<span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201d<\/span> When authors use pathos as a writing technique, they are appealing to readers\u2019 emotions, beliefs, and values.<\/li>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>BATHOS<\/strong> in Greek roughly means \u201cdepth,\u201d but it has evolved to address an anticlimactic situation when there is a sudden appearance of the commonplace or boring during what was otherwise serious or exciting. In modern times, the technique of bathos is often used for humorous effects in comedy, using ridiculous metaphors, figures of speech, language, and ideas.<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<h2>Precision: Is It \u201cEn Pointe\u201d?<\/h2>\r\nPrecision with language is critical for true understanding. For written work to be precise, it must be sufficiently detailed and what some today call <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>en pointe\u201d\u2014a term that is drawn from the realm of ballet and is French for dancing precisely on one\u2019s toes. Precision in the English language can be tricky, as English is a polyglot language (made up of multiple languages) which is fluid and constantly evolving and, like a fluid, changes shape depending on the container or context. For example, etymologists (who study words and their origins) track the term <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201con point\u201d<\/span>\u2014which has become common on social media and the English vernacular\u2014to the French <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201cen pointe.\u201d<\/span> Today, the phrase \u201con point\u201d is commonly used, with few people aware of its more precise spelling and use in ballet.\r\n\r\nPrecision within writing demands that words are not only spelled correctly but that their meanings are also clear and that the words are not overused.\r\n\r\nPunctuation needs to be used in a manner that follows standard rules, and ideas must be expressed in ways that are direct while still allowing for the writer to perform with skill and artistry.\r\n\r\nWriting with precision at the college level entails researching, reading, and evaluating, and studying to understand information in greater detail and depth. For example, the previous explanation of rhetorical concepts is a college-level understanding that goes beyond the high-school triad of pathos, ethos, and logos, but there are more detailed and deeper readings and discussions about rhetoric in upper-level college and graduate-level courses.\r\n<h2>Accuracy: Is It Correct? Is It True?<\/h2>\r\nAccuracy is the difference between \u201cen pointe\u201d and \u201con point,\u201d between \u201cresume\u201d and \u201cr\u00e9sum\u00e9,\u201d and between \u201caina\u201d and \u201c<span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u2018<\/span>\u0101ina.\u201d It\u2019s the subtleties that make all the difference. For example, English language speakers can resume (or pick up) where they left off. In French, the word \u201cr\u00e9sum\u00e9\u201d is a short, employment-related document detailing one\u2019s education, work history, and job and people skills.\r\n\r\nBut today, the French meaning has become part of the English vernacular, and the accent marks are often omitted while the word retains its dual meaning. Using older technology, writers sometimes were unable to include the French accent marks. Today, software often automatically will add them for precise, accurate spelling.\r\n\r\nIn Hawai\u2018i, the popular expression <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>m\u0101lama \u0101ina\u201d encourages people to take care of the earth. Because the Hawaiian alphabet includes the glottal stop (or \u2018okina [<span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u2018<\/span>], a consonant) and long vowels indicated by the macron (or kahak\u014d, the line above long vowels), omitting or changing the letters of the alphabet changes the meanings of words just as they do in English (e.g., <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>red,\u201d <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>read,\u201d and <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>bed\u201d have different meanings based on letters used or omitted).\r\n\r\nAccuracy in spelling in any language is essential. For example, in Hawaiian, the word \u201c<span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u2018<\/span>\u0101ina\u201d (with the <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u2018<\/span>okina and kahak\u014d for the long \u0101) means \u201cland,\u201d but \u201c\u2018aina\u201d (with just the initial <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u2018<\/span>okina) means \u201cmeal\u201d (among other things), and \u201caina\u201d (without either of the marks necessary to accurately form two of the Hawaiian alphabets) means \u201csexual intercourse.\u201d The glottal stop and the macron are important marks forming complete letters within the Hawaiian alphabet, just as any English word relies on every necessary marking (as in the line that forms a <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>t\u201d and, if omitted is an <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>l\u201d or the number <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>one\u201d). Clearly, accuracy is important across the world\u2019s languages.\r\n\r\nAs scholars and writers across the world become more globally aware, they grow more accurate in the use of others\u2019 languages. Students who are developing their expertise and college success skills also grow more aware of the importance of accuracy, not only when it comes to spelling, punctuation, and word usage, but also grammar, syntax, and conducting research within and outside of their respective disciplines.\r\n<h2>Depth: Is It Sufficiently Complex?<\/h2>\r\nWhen writing or speech is deep, it covers the complexity of a topic. It doesn<span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u2019<\/span>t skim the surface. It dives deeply into the profound knowledge and substantial understanding of a topic. For example, a list explaining rhetoric as made up of three concepts (logos, ethos, and pathos) is not as deep and complex as a list showing six concepts (the three plus bathos, telos, and kairos) or even longer lists with deeper descriptions and definitions. In another example, students progress from one-page book reports in elementary school to deeper, comparative, and analytical essays in college.\r\n\r\nWhen analyzing the depth of any essay, including their own essays and those of their peers, students can ask these types of questions:\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">How deeply does this essay go into its topic?<\/li>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Is it detailed enough?<\/li>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Did it go far enough into the research and reviews of other texts to demonstrate a deep knowledge about the subject?<\/li>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">How thoroughly have specific subtopics within a major been researched?<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<h2>Breadth: Are All Views Considered?<\/h2>\r\nBreadth is how broad or wide a topic has been discussed in writing or in speech. For example, to attain breadth in a persuasive essay, a writer must consider not only one point of view, but all the multiple major perspectives about an issue. Breadth also entails considering multiple contexts of an issue and multiple analytical approaches to solving a problem.\r\n\r\nBreadth means reading more than a handful of articles supporting one side of an issue; it means reading more articles supporting various perspectives so the writer can truly understand all viewpoints about the issue and can discuss the issue with breadth that builds a deeper understanding and fairness. When analyzing the breadth of any essay, students and instructors ask questions such as the following:\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Is the content of an essay sufficiently comprehensive enough to cover a wide range of perspectives and angles on a given topic?<\/li>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Is anything missing that should be included in the scope of the topic and which would help the essay achieve enough breadth?<\/li>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Has the opposing view (i.e., the <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>naysayer<span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u2019<\/span>s\u201d perspective) been explored so as to strengthen the writer\u2019s own argument? (This consideration is particularly key in the development of a fully supported and wisely composed persuasive or argumentative essay.)<\/li>\r\n \t<li>What has not yet been considered to make this idea or essay complete?<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<h2>Logic: Does It All Make Sense?<\/h2>\r\nFor students to create valid arguments through essays or other written works that are meant to be persuasive, they must use accurate reasoning and avoid logical fallacies. Fallacies are arguments that use faulty reasoning, thus making them illogical. If text makes a reader stop and think, <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>Wait. What?\u201d it may mean the writer needs to work on logic.\r\n\r\nLogic exists as the essence of philosophy, mathematics, computer programming, computer science, and most other science and technology disciplines. It requires step-by-step thinking and progression in order to design a machine that works or to research and write a report worthy of submission for potential publication.\r\n\r\nWhen analyzing the logic of any text, students and instructors ask questions such as the following:\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Does a sentence, paragraph, or argument make sense?<\/li>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Does one point follow another point with reason and connected ideas and transitions, rather than jumping from point A to point Z without sufficient explanation of how they are related?<\/li>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Are all assertions fortified by sufficient evidence?<\/li>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Does all data collected, whether determined as relevant or not, follow a logical approach?<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<h2>Significance: Does It Matter?<\/h2>\r\nThe intellectual standard of significance indicates the importance and weight of a topic or point and is connected to logic and depth. For example, the deeper, broader definition of <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>rhetoric\u201d from the Aristotelian perspective is more significant than the everyday, newspaper use of the word.\r\n\r\nSignificance is related to the level of importance of one thing in relation to the grander scheme of things and to the additional standards of priority and value. For example, students might write about an 18-year-old person's right to drink alcohol, but that essay would be less significant than essays about increased drunk-driving-related fatalities in the community. Some 18 year olds might argue that, if they can be drafted into the military and be required to go to war, they should have the right to drink. However, the other side of the argument asserts the right of people of all ages to travel safely on the roads, and holding back on allowing hundreds more individuals from potentially driving drunk has more weight.\r\n\r\nWhen analyzing the significance of any document, students and instructors ask questions such as the following:\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Is the information important enough to include?<\/li>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Does the information answer the question asked in an assignment?<\/li>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">What key points are most important for writers to include and for readers to consider?<\/li>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Is this topic important in relation to other topics in the same subject area?<\/li>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">What\u2019s the most important thing to focus on?<\/li>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Is this topic worth the writer\u2019s time researching and the reader\u2019s time reading?<\/li>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Would there be enough readers interested in this topic?<\/li>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">So what? Why is a topic or point more important than another topic or point?<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<h2>Relevance: Is It Essential to the Main Idea?<\/h2>\r\nIf paragraphs in an essay are relevant, they are related to the main topic and help support the main idea with additional, related, relevant details and evidence. If paragraphs are irrelevant, a reader might think, \u201cWait. What? How is this on topic?\u201d\r\n\r\nIf, for example, an essay begins by stating that government officials should take five major actions to solve the issue of homelessness in Hawai\u2018i, but then the majority of the body paragraphs wander into opinions focused on the history of governmental decision-making in the islands for decades, a reader might feel lost and wonder how much of the content of the essay is related to solving homelessness in Hawai\u2018i.\r\n\r\nWhen analyzing the relevance of any essay, students and instructors ask questions such as the following:\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Does this point help readers understand the main issue?<\/li>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Does this essay focus on the assignment question or prompt?<\/li>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Does it answer the main question?<\/li>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">If this paragraph is slightly off-topic, what can be done to refocus it so that it does its job in supporting the main idea in the thesis statement?<\/li>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">If a point is confusing readers who don\u2019t understand how it\u2019s related to the main idea, does it belong in this essay?<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<h2>Fairness: Is It Objective and Judicious?<\/h2>\r\nThe word \u201cfair\u201d is often used synonymously with \u201cjust\u201d or \u201cjudicious\u201d and is related to \u201cjustice.\u201d Especially in essays that are meant to persuade through logical argumentation, topics and points of view (POVs or <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>perspectives\u201d) need to be treated fairly and diplomatically. A fair, even-handed treatment doesn't necessarily mean agreeing to opposing (or <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>naysayer's\u201d) POVs, but strong, college-level writing must acknowledge the opposing POVs, then must either accommodate or refute them. For example, an essay may state, <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>The opponents have valid points regarding X and Y. They are right about this and that. However, they are innaccurate about this specific point about X, and their argument doesn't negate A and B, which remains the most accurate ideas and still strongly support this argument.\u201d\r\n\r\nWhen analyzing the fairness of any essay, students and instructors ask questions such as the following:\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Does the writer of this essay exhibit the ability to fairly assess the viewpoints of others, even opposing viewpoints?<\/li>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Are there any fallacies, such as ad hominems <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">that unfairly label opponents rather than speak directly and precisely about the opposing argument or POV itself? (Note: The term <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>ad hominem\u201d is s<\/span>hort for <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>argumentum ad hominem\u201d and is a fallacious argumentative strategy whereby genuine discussion of the topic at hand is avoided by instead attacking the character, motive, or other attribute of the person making the argument, or persons associated with the argument, rather than attacking the substance of the argument itself.)<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Does the writer or speaker have a conflict of interest? Does that conflict of interest appear as bias in the text? Given today\u2019s political scene and questionable statements by government officials, this question may bear more significance.<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<h2>Apply the Intellectual Standards to Studying and Writing<\/h2>\r\nStudents and instructors in colleges and the universities often consider the quality of their own and others\u2019 work by applying the concepts of intellectual standards, whether or not they are aware of them or have had them articulated for them. Scholarship is evaluated for quality in terms of clarity, precision, accuracy, depth, breadth, logic, significance, relevance, and fairness. Successful college-level studying involves reading, annotating, writing, discussing, and analyzing information and involves practicing skills to apply new knowledge, all of which result in learning and building expertise. Writing to communicate, writing to learn, and writing to demonstrate learning and skills are key skills in college and should demonstrate the mindful application of intellectual standards.\r\n\r\n&nbsp;\r\n<div class=\"textbox textbox--exercises\"><header class=\"textbox__header\">\r\n<p class=\"textbox__title\">Activities<\/p>\r\n\r\n<\/header>\r\n<div class=\"textbox__content\">\r\n<ol>\r\n \t<li>View and take notes on the video \u201c<a href=\"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/watch?v=gcxhalSk73k\">The Intellectual Standards: An Introduction<\/a>,\u201d posted by Gary Meegan on April 2, 2014. Review the notes. Then describe and define the nine intellectual standards, using your own (and different and unique) words and phrasing.\u00a0 Then use the nine intellectual standards to evaluate a partner's personalized descriptions.<\/li>\r\n \t<li>View the video \u201c<a href=\"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/watch?v=Fmhdx_kRd-w\">Shot on iPhone XS\u2014Don\u2019t mess with Mother\u2014Apple<\/a>,\u201d posted by the Apple company. Take notes on observations about the visual and audio rhetoric and observations on what the images, movements, music, and words communicate, how they meet intellectual standards, and how they meet the company's purpose(s) for creating the video.<\/li>\r\n<\/ol>\r\n<\/div>\r\n<\/div>\r\n<div class=\"textbox\">\r\n<h2>Works Cited<\/h2>\r\n<p class=\"import-TextBody hanging-indent\">Apple. \u201c<a class=\"rId6\" href=\"http:\/\/www.youtube.com\/watch?v=Fmhdx_kRd-w\"><span class=\"import-InternetLink\">Shot on iPhone XS \u2013 Don\u2019t mess with Mother \u2013 Apple<\/span><\/a>.\u201d <em class=\"import-Emphasis\">YouTube<\/em>, 17 April 2019.<\/p>\r\n<p class=\"import-TextBody hanging-indent\">Meegan, Gary. \u201c<a class=\"rId10\" href=\"http:\/\/www.youtube.com\/watch?v=gcxhalSk73k\"><span class=\"import-InternetLink\">The Intellectual Standards: An Introduction<\/span><\/a>.\u201d <em class=\"import-Emphasis\">YouTube<\/em>, 2 April 2014.<\/p>\r\n<p class=\"import-TextBody hanging-indent\">\u201c<a class=\"rId12\" href=\"http:\/\/www.merriam-webster.com\/dictionary\/rhetoric\"><span class=\"import-InternetLink\">Rhetoric<\/span><\/a>.<span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201d<\/span> <em class=\"import-Emphasis\">Meriam\u2013Webster Online. <\/em>Merriam-Webster, LLC.<\/p>\r\n\r\n<h2>Additional Resources<\/h2>\r\n<p class=\"hanging-indent\">Elder, Linda, and Richard Paul. \u201c<a href=\"https:\/\/www.criticalthinking.org\/pages\/universal-intellectual-standards\/527\">Universal Intellectual Standards<\/a>.\u201d <em>The Foundation for Critical Thinking<\/em>, October 2010.<\/p>\r\n<p class=\"hanging-indent\"><a href=\"http:\/\/www.criticalthinking.org\/\">Foundation for Critical Thinking<\/a> at CriticalThinking.org.<\/p>\r\n<p class=\"hanging-indent\">Hill, David Jayne. \u201c<a href=\"#v=onepage&amp;q=bathos\"><em class=\"import-Emphasis\">Bathos<\/em><\/a>.\u201d <em class=\"import-Emphasis\">The Elements of Rhetoric and Composition: A Text-book for Schools and Colleges. <\/em>Sheldon, 1878.<\/p>\r\n<p class=\"hanging-indent\">Paul, Richard, and Linda Elder. \"<a href=\"https:\/\/files.eric.ed.gov\/fulltext\/EJ1067269.pdf\">Critical Thinking: Intellectual Standards Essential to Reasoning Within Every Domain of Human Thought, Part Two.<\/a>\" <em>Journal of Developmental Education,<\/em> Volume 37, Issue 1, Fall 2013, pp. 32-36.<\/p>\r\n<p class=\"hanging-indent\">Rapp, Christof. \u201c<a class=\"rId11\" href=\"http:\/\/plato.stanford.edu\/archives\/spr2010\/entries\/aristotle-rhetoric\/\"><span class=\"import-InternetLink\">Aristotle's Rhetoric<\/span><\/a>.\u201d <em class=\"import-Emphasis\">The Stanford Encyclopedia of Philosophy<\/em> (Spring 2010 Edition), Edward N. Zalta (ed.)<\/p>\r\n<p class=\"hanging-indent\">Smith, Robin. \u201cAristotle\u2019s Logic.\u201d <em class=\"import-Emphasis\">The Stanford Encyclopedia of Philosophy<\/em> (Summer 2019 Edition), Edward N. Zalta (ed.), [forthcoming]<\/p>\r\n\r\n<\/div>\r\n<\/div>","rendered":"<div class=\"intellectual-standards-for-quality\">\n<p>The word \u201cstandard\u201d is used to describe the level of quality that a given item possesses. So an \u201cintellectual standard\u201d is one that measures the overall value of a scholarly effort. Such standards apply to essays, reports, assignments, group discussions, and even notetaking. For overall success, students need to know their professors\u2019 standards and need to develop their own standards, with the concept of\u00a0 \u201cintellectual standards\u201d at the forefront.<\/p>\n<p>There are nine primary intellectual standards to keep in mind: clarity, precision, accuracy, depth, breadth, logic, significance, relevance, and fairness. Keeping a list of these standards (or even using an actual checklist) and applying them to academic thinking, writing, and other scholarly interaction is an excellent way to ensure one\u2019s continued intellectual growth and college and career success.<\/p>\n<p>These standards can help scholars, both students and instructors, form connected and quality ideas (e.g., \u201ccritical thinking\u201d or \u201canalysis\u201d) and craft written work (e.g., essays, reports, articles, reflections, and other writing sometimes known as \u201cpapers\u201d or \u201chomework\u201d).<\/p>\n<h2>Clarity: Do You Get It?<\/h2>\n<p>Many of the editorial comments and corrections (e.g., those from peers, mentors, tutors, and professors) shared with students regarding their written work is related to clarity. When an essay is clear, it\u2019s understandable and communicates information to readers with ease. None of the statements are confusing or ambiguous. There aren\u2019t areas within the essay where the meaning is lost due to exaggerated narrative or forced and unnatural word choice. When an essay is clear, readers can follow the path that the writer is communicating. They can read smoothly without stopping to ponder what a word or even an entire sentence means.<\/p>\n<h3>Sentence Clarity<\/h3>\n<h4>Misplaced Modifiers<\/h4>\n<p>One way sentences become unclear is when they include misplaced (or dangling) modifiers or vague pronoun references. Here are some examples:<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px;\">Original: <em>The sun, as he was surfing, sparkled on the water.<\/em><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"list-style-type: none;\">\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">In this sentence, the modifying phrase \u201cas he was surfing\u201d is placed where it modifies the sun not the surfer. (i.e., It sounds like the sun is surfing.)<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">The sentence also loses clarity because the pronoun \u201che\u201d is vague.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px;\">Revised: <em>As Kalani surfed, the sun sparkled on the water.<\/em><\/p>\n<h4>Missing Punctuation<\/h4>\n<p>Punctuation marks can be tricky. However, within the English language, their correct usage is essential to be sure one\u2019s intended meaning is clear. Here&#8217;s an example:<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px;\">Original: <em>Lets eat Grandma<\/em><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"list-style-type: none;\">\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Devoid of punctuation, it seems like Grandma is going to be dinner.<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">To clarify, an apostrophe and a comma are needed.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px;\">Revised: <em>Let\u2019s eat, Grandma!<\/em><\/p>\n<p>Punctuation is for the reader, so it&#8217;s important that each punctuation mark&#8217;s usage is clear and that the writer knows how to use it correctly<\/p>\n<h3>Rhetoric: Is Meaning Clear for Everyone?<\/h3>\n<p>When words have more than one meaning, using them in a sentence or within an essay can pose problems related to clarity. The word \u201crhetoric\u201d is one such word. Generally thought of as \u201cthe art of speaking or writing effectively,\u201d the word enters many English writing classroom discussions.<\/p>\n<p>Sometimes <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>rhetoric<span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201d<\/span> is referred to in a negative light, as in the way some people sometimes express themselves using bombastic and hyperbolic words and expressions. The Merriam-Webster dictionary also tells us that rhetoric can be defined as \u201cthe study of writing or speaking as a means of communication or persuasion\u201d or \u201cskill in the effective use of speech.\u201d It can even be simply considered as \u201cverbal communication\u201d and \u201cdiscourse\u201d (<span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>Rhetoric,\u201d <a href=\"https:\/\/www.merriam-webster.com\/dictionary\/rhetoric\">Merriam-Webster<\/a>). So knowing the many definitions for this word is essential for college success because individuals, including instructors, will discuss rhetoric in a variety of ways.<\/p>\n<p>The history of rhetoric is directly connected to the Greek philosopher Aristotle, whose rhetorical concepts are central for understanding the art of persuasion (also called argumentation) in both speaking and writing. Most high school students may know about logos, ethos, and pathos; however, other rhetorical concepts exist, as described below.<\/p>\n<h4>Clarifying Aristotelian Rhetorical Concepts<\/h4>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>TELOS<\/strong> is the Greek word indicating the \u201cpurpose\u201d of a speech or text. It refers to a writer\u2019s intended purpose as well as to the audience\u2019s purpose as readers who wish to be informed by the writer\u2019s words.<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>KAIROS<\/strong> translates from Greek to the \u201cright, critical, or opportune\u201d moment, and the term can be used when talking about the persuasion of an audience through writing or speaking. Analyzing the rhetorical techniques of a speech or text through kairos involves determining how the language within a text supports an argument using the setting, time, and place.<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>LOGOS<\/strong> roughly translates to \u201cword,\u201d and it is consistently used when determining the logic of reasoning within an argument. Some students simplify this concept to mean facts, figures, and statistics, which writers use to appeal to readers\u2019 sense of reason.<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>ETHOS<\/strong> is Greek for \u201ccharacter,\u201d which speaks to a writer\u2019s authority and expertise. As such, incorporating ethos within an argument establishes the writer as credible. Some students simplify this concept as an <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>ethical appeal\u201d or the traits of trustworthiness or credibility.<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>PATHOS<\/strong> is the Greek word indicating not only \u201csuffering\u201d but also \u201cexperience,\u201d and it is related to feelings, beliefs, and values, sometimes simplified as an <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>emotional appeal.<span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201d<\/span> When authors use pathos as a writing technique, they are appealing to readers\u2019 emotions, beliefs, and values.<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>BATHOS<\/strong> in Greek roughly means \u201cdepth,\u201d but it has evolved to address an anticlimactic situation when there is a sudden appearance of the commonplace or boring during what was otherwise serious or exciting. In modern times, the technique of bathos is often used for humorous effects in comedy, using ridiculous metaphors, figures of speech, language, and ideas.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<h2>Precision: Is It \u201cEn Pointe\u201d?<\/h2>\n<p>Precision with language is critical for true understanding. For written work to be precise, it must be sufficiently detailed and what some today call <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>en pointe\u201d\u2014a term that is drawn from the realm of ballet and is French for dancing precisely on one\u2019s toes. Precision in the English language can be tricky, as English is a polyglot language (made up of multiple languages) which is fluid and constantly evolving and, like a fluid, changes shape depending on the container or context. For example, etymologists (who study words and their origins) track the term <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201con point\u201d<\/span>\u2014which has become common on social media and the English vernacular\u2014to the French <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201cen pointe.\u201d<\/span> Today, the phrase \u201con point\u201d is commonly used, with few people aware of its more precise spelling and use in ballet.<\/p>\n<p>Precision within writing demands that words are not only spelled correctly but that their meanings are also clear and that the words are not overused.<\/p>\n<p>Punctuation needs to be used in a manner that follows standard rules, and ideas must be expressed in ways that are direct while still allowing for the writer to perform with skill and artistry.<\/p>\n<p>Writing with precision at the college level entails researching, reading, and evaluating, and studying to understand information in greater detail and depth. For example, the previous explanation of rhetorical concepts is a college-level understanding that goes beyond the high-school triad of pathos, ethos, and logos, but there are more detailed and deeper readings and discussions about rhetoric in upper-level college and graduate-level courses.<\/p>\n<h2>Accuracy: Is It Correct? Is It True?<\/h2>\n<p>Accuracy is the difference between \u201cen pointe\u201d and \u201con point,\u201d between \u201cresume\u201d and \u201cr\u00e9sum\u00e9,\u201d and between \u201caina\u201d and \u201c<span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u2018<\/span>\u0101ina.\u201d It\u2019s the subtleties that make all the difference. For example, English language speakers can resume (or pick up) where they left off. In French, the word \u201cr\u00e9sum\u00e9\u201d is a short, employment-related document detailing one\u2019s education, work history, and job and people skills.<\/p>\n<p>But today, the French meaning has become part of the English vernacular, and the accent marks are often omitted while the word retains its dual meaning. Using older technology, writers sometimes were unable to include the French accent marks. Today, software often automatically will add them for precise, accurate spelling.<\/p>\n<p>In Hawai\u2018i, the popular expression <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>m\u0101lama \u0101ina\u201d encourages people to take care of the earth. Because the Hawaiian alphabet includes the glottal stop (or \u2018okina [<span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u2018<\/span>], a consonant) and long vowels indicated by the macron (or kahak\u014d, the line above long vowels), omitting or changing the letters of the alphabet changes the meanings of words just as they do in English (e.g., <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>red,\u201d <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>read,\u201d and <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>bed\u201d have different meanings based on letters used or omitted).<\/p>\n<p>Accuracy in spelling in any language is essential. For example, in Hawaiian, the word \u201c<span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u2018<\/span>\u0101ina\u201d (with the <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u2018<\/span>okina and kahak\u014d for the long \u0101) means \u201cland,\u201d but \u201c\u2018aina\u201d (with just the initial <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u2018<\/span>okina) means \u201cmeal\u201d (among other things), and \u201caina\u201d (without either of the marks necessary to accurately form two of the Hawaiian alphabets) means \u201csexual intercourse.\u201d The glottal stop and the macron are important marks forming complete letters within the Hawaiian alphabet, just as any English word relies on every necessary marking (as in the line that forms a <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>t\u201d and, if omitted is an <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>l\u201d or the number <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>one\u201d). Clearly, accuracy is important across the world\u2019s languages.<\/p>\n<p>As scholars and writers across the world become more globally aware, they grow more accurate in the use of others\u2019 languages. Students who are developing their expertise and college success skills also grow more aware of the importance of accuracy, not only when it comes to spelling, punctuation, and word usage, but also grammar, syntax, and conducting research within and outside of their respective disciplines.<\/p>\n<h2>Depth: Is It Sufficiently Complex?<\/h2>\n<p>When writing or speech is deep, it covers the complexity of a topic. It doesn<span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u2019<\/span>t skim the surface. It dives deeply into the profound knowledge and substantial understanding of a topic. For example, a list explaining rhetoric as made up of three concepts (logos, ethos, and pathos) is not as deep and complex as a list showing six concepts (the three plus bathos, telos, and kairos) or even longer lists with deeper descriptions and definitions. In another example, students progress from one-page book reports in elementary school to deeper, comparative, and analytical essays in college.<\/p>\n<p>When analyzing the depth of any essay, including their own essays and those of their peers, students can ask these types of questions:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">How deeply does this essay go into its topic?<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Is it detailed enough?<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Did it go far enough into the research and reviews of other texts to demonstrate a deep knowledge about the subject?<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">How thoroughly have specific subtopics within a major been researched?<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<h2>Breadth: Are All Views Considered?<\/h2>\n<p>Breadth is how broad or wide a topic has been discussed in writing or in speech. For example, to attain breadth in a persuasive essay, a writer must consider not only one point of view, but all the multiple major perspectives about an issue. Breadth also entails considering multiple contexts of an issue and multiple analytical approaches to solving a problem.<\/p>\n<p>Breadth means reading more than a handful of articles supporting one side of an issue; it means reading more articles supporting various perspectives so the writer can truly understand all viewpoints about the issue and can discuss the issue with breadth that builds a deeper understanding and fairness. When analyzing the breadth of any essay, students and instructors ask questions such as the following:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Is the content of an essay sufficiently comprehensive enough to cover a wide range of perspectives and angles on a given topic?<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Is anything missing that should be included in the scope of the topic and which would help the essay achieve enough breadth?<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Has the opposing view (i.e., the <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>naysayer<span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u2019<\/span>s\u201d perspective) been explored so as to strengthen the writer\u2019s own argument? (This consideration is particularly key in the development of a fully supported and wisely composed persuasive or argumentative essay.)<\/li>\n<li>What has not yet been considered to make this idea or essay complete?<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<h2>Logic: Does It All Make Sense?<\/h2>\n<p>For students to create valid arguments through essays or other written works that are meant to be persuasive, they must use accurate reasoning and avoid logical fallacies. Fallacies are arguments that use faulty reasoning, thus making them illogical. If text makes a reader stop and think, <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>Wait. What?\u201d it may mean the writer needs to work on logic.<\/p>\n<p>Logic exists as the essence of philosophy, mathematics, computer programming, computer science, and most other science and technology disciplines. It requires step-by-step thinking and progression in order to design a machine that works or to research and write a report worthy of submission for potential publication.<\/p>\n<p>When analyzing the logic of any text, students and instructors ask questions such as the following:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Does a sentence, paragraph, or argument make sense?<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Does one point follow another point with reason and connected ideas and transitions, rather than jumping from point A to point Z without sufficient explanation of how they are related?<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Are all assertions fortified by sufficient evidence?<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Does all data collected, whether determined as relevant or not, follow a logical approach?<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<h2>Significance: Does It Matter?<\/h2>\n<p>The intellectual standard of significance indicates the importance and weight of a topic or point and is connected to logic and depth. For example, the deeper, broader definition of <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>rhetoric\u201d from the Aristotelian perspective is more significant than the everyday, newspaper use of the word.<\/p>\n<p>Significance is related to the level of importance of one thing in relation to the grander scheme of things and to the additional standards of priority and value. For example, students might write about an 18-year-old person&#8217;s right to drink alcohol, but that essay would be less significant than essays about increased drunk-driving-related fatalities in the community. Some 18 year olds might argue that, if they can be drafted into the military and be required to go to war, they should have the right to drink. However, the other side of the argument asserts the right of people of all ages to travel safely on the roads, and holding back on allowing hundreds more individuals from potentially driving drunk has more weight.<\/p>\n<p>When analyzing the significance of any document, students and instructors ask questions such as the following:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Is the information important enough to include?<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Does the information answer the question asked in an assignment?<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">What key points are most important for writers to include and for readers to consider?<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Is this topic important in relation to other topics in the same subject area?<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">What\u2019s the most important thing to focus on?<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Is this topic worth the writer\u2019s time researching and the reader\u2019s time reading?<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Would there be enough readers interested in this topic?<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">So what? Why is a topic or point more important than another topic or point?<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<h2>Relevance: Is It Essential to the Main Idea?<\/h2>\n<p>If paragraphs in an essay are relevant, they are related to the main topic and help support the main idea with additional, related, relevant details and evidence. If paragraphs are irrelevant, a reader might think, \u201cWait. What? How is this on topic?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>If, for example, an essay begins by stating that government officials should take five major actions to solve the issue of homelessness in Hawai\u2018i, but then the majority of the body paragraphs wander into opinions focused on the history of governmental decision-making in the islands for decades, a reader might feel lost and wonder how much of the content of the essay is related to solving homelessness in Hawai\u2018i.<\/p>\n<p>When analyzing the relevance of any essay, students and instructors ask questions such as the following:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Does this point help readers understand the main issue?<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Does this essay focus on the assignment question or prompt?<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Does it answer the main question?<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">If this paragraph is slightly off-topic, what can be done to refocus it so that it does its job in supporting the main idea in the thesis statement?<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">If a point is confusing readers who don\u2019t understand how it\u2019s related to the main idea, does it belong in this essay?<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<h2>Fairness: Is It Objective and Judicious?<\/h2>\n<p>The word \u201cfair\u201d is often used synonymously with \u201cjust\u201d or \u201cjudicious\u201d and is related to \u201cjustice.\u201d Especially in essays that are meant to persuade through logical argumentation, topics and points of view (POVs or <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>perspectives\u201d) need to be treated fairly and diplomatically. A fair, even-handed treatment doesn&#8217;t necessarily mean agreeing to opposing (or <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>naysayer&#8217;s\u201d) POVs, but strong, college-level writing must acknowledge the opposing POVs, then must either accommodate or refute them. For example, an essay may state, <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>The opponents have valid points regarding X and Y. They are right about this and that. However, they are innaccurate about this specific point about X, and their argument doesn&#8217;t negate A and B, which remains the most accurate ideas and still strongly support this argument.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>When analyzing the fairness of any essay, students and instructors ask questions such as the following:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Does the writer of this essay exhibit the ability to fairly assess the viewpoints of others, even opposing viewpoints?<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Are there any fallacies, such as ad hominems <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">that unfairly label opponents rather than speak directly and precisely about the opposing argument or POV itself? (Note: The term <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>ad hominem\u201d is s<\/span>hort for <span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201c<\/span>argumentum ad hominem\u201d and is a fallacious argumentative strategy whereby genuine discussion of the topic at hand is avoided by instead attacking the character, motive, or other attribute of the person making the argument, or persons associated with the argument, rather than attacking the substance of the argument itself.)<\/li>\n<li>Does the writer or speaker have a conflict of interest? Does that conflict of interest appear as bias in the text? Given today\u2019s political scene and questionable statements by government officials, this question may bear more significance.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<h2>Apply the Intellectual Standards to Studying and Writing<\/h2>\n<p>Students and instructors in colleges and the universities often consider the quality of their own and others\u2019 work by applying the concepts of intellectual standards, whether or not they are aware of them or have had them articulated for them. Scholarship is evaluated for quality in terms of clarity, precision, accuracy, depth, breadth, logic, significance, relevance, and fairness. Successful college-level studying involves reading, annotating, writing, discussing, and analyzing information and involves practicing skills to apply new knowledge, all of which result in learning and building expertise. Writing to communicate, writing to learn, and writing to demonstrate learning and skills are key skills in college and should demonstrate the mindful application of intellectual standards.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<div class=\"textbox textbox--exercises\">\n<header class=\"textbox__header\">\n<p class=\"textbox__title\">Activities<\/p>\n<\/header>\n<div class=\"textbox__content\">\n<ol>\n<li>View and take notes on the video \u201c<a href=\"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/watch?v=gcxhalSk73k\">The Intellectual Standards: An Introduction<\/a>,\u201d posted by Gary Meegan on April 2, 2014. Review the notes. Then describe and define the nine intellectual standards, using your own (and different and unique) words and phrasing.\u00a0 Then use the nine intellectual standards to evaluate a partner&#8217;s personalized descriptions.<\/li>\n<li>View the video \u201c<a href=\"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/watch?v=Fmhdx_kRd-w\">Shot on iPhone XS\u2014Don\u2019t mess with Mother\u2014Apple<\/a>,\u201d posted by the Apple company. Take notes on observations about the visual and audio rhetoric and observations on what the images, movements, music, and words communicate, how they meet intellectual standards, and how they meet the company&#8217;s purpose(s) for creating the video.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div class=\"textbox\">\n<h2>Works Cited<\/h2>\n<p class=\"import-TextBody hanging-indent\">Apple. \u201c<a class=\"rId6\" href=\"http:\/\/www.youtube.com\/watch?v=Fmhdx_kRd-w\"><span class=\"import-InternetLink\">Shot on iPhone XS \u2013 Don\u2019t mess with Mother \u2013 Apple<\/span><\/a>.\u201d <em class=\"import-Emphasis\">YouTube<\/em>, 17 April 2019.<\/p>\n<p class=\"import-TextBody hanging-indent\">Meegan, Gary. \u201c<a class=\"rId10\" href=\"http:\/\/www.youtube.com\/watch?v=gcxhalSk73k\"><span class=\"import-InternetLink\">The Intellectual Standards: An Introduction<\/span><\/a>.\u201d <em class=\"import-Emphasis\">YouTube<\/em>, 2 April 2014.<\/p>\n<p class=\"import-TextBody hanging-indent\">\u201c<a class=\"rId12\" href=\"http:\/\/www.merriam-webster.com\/dictionary\/rhetoric\"><span class=\"import-InternetLink\">Rhetoric<\/span><\/a>.<span style=\"float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; cursor: text; font-family: 'Lora',serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none;\">\u201d<\/span> <em class=\"import-Emphasis\">Meriam\u2013Webster Online. <\/em>Merriam-Webster, LLC.<\/p>\n<h2>Additional Resources<\/h2>\n<p class=\"hanging-indent\">Elder, Linda, and Richard Paul. \u201c<a href=\"https:\/\/www.criticalthinking.org\/pages\/universal-intellectual-standards\/527\">Universal Intellectual Standards<\/a>.\u201d <em>The Foundation for Critical Thinking<\/em>, October 2010.<\/p>\n<p class=\"hanging-indent\"><a href=\"http:\/\/www.criticalthinking.org\/\">Foundation for Critical Thinking<\/a> at CriticalThinking.org.<\/p>\n<p class=\"hanging-indent\">Hill, David Jayne. \u201c<a href=\"#v=onepage&amp;q=bathos\"><em class=\"import-Emphasis\">Bathos<\/em><\/a>.\u201d <em class=\"import-Emphasis\">The Elements of Rhetoric and Composition: A Text-book for Schools and Colleges. <\/em>Sheldon, 1878.<\/p>\n<p class=\"hanging-indent\">Paul, Richard, and Linda Elder. &#8220;<a href=\"https:\/\/files.eric.ed.gov\/fulltext\/EJ1067269.pdf\">Critical Thinking: Intellectual Standards Essential to Reasoning Within Every Domain of Human Thought, Part Two.<\/a>&#8221; <em>Journal of Developmental Education,<\/em> Volume 37, Issue 1, Fall 2013, pp. 32-36.<\/p>\n<p class=\"hanging-indent\">Rapp, Christof. \u201c<a class=\"rId11\" href=\"http:\/\/plato.stanford.edu\/archives\/spr2010\/entries\/aristotle-rhetoric\/\"><span class=\"import-InternetLink\">Aristotle&#8217;s Rhetoric<\/span><\/a>.\u201d <em class=\"import-Emphasis\">The Stanford Encyclopedia of Philosophy<\/em> (Spring 2010 Edition), Edward N. 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